You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The provided pie charts depict the data from a survey conducted to know the reason why students chose an MBA degree and the reason why they are preferred by employers.
Overall, the majority of students opt for an MBA degree as they believe there are better job opportunities for an MBA graduate. However, there are multiple aspects like knowledge, personality, appearance, and connections that attract the employer to a larger extent.
Now turning to the details, Around 65 percent of students who chose MBA, believe there are better job opportunities for MBA graduates while 15 percent of them think it enhances their ability to do work better. Out of the rest, twenty percent of the student opt for MBA as twelve percent of them believe it is good for their personal development whereas eight percent of them believe they would be able to help others.
As illustrated in the pie chart, twenty-five percent of employers prefer candidates with better personalities and twenty-five percent require experienced employees. It is has been noticed, experienced employees having connections are preferred by twenty-percent recruiters, and the rest of thirty percent of employers prioritize them by qualifications and the way of presentation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32487309645 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05306213237 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.03121591 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.857142857 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176330479714 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891305243895 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561059581386 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118798615565 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542552501663 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.