You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process of making olive oil. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram shows how olive oil is made. This report will provide a brief description of the main stages in such a process.
This progress starts with the olive, which is collected from olive oil and finishes with the fulfilled products, such as extra virgin olive oil and olive oil.
To begin with, as we can see from the diagram, there are two ways to make olive oil. Firstly, virgin olive oil is directly made from olive by the filter. Then it can become a product as extra virgin olive oil or olive oil. Secondly, the olive after being collected from the tree is milled and pressed. The following step is that it is refined by a refinery to become olive oil. At this point in progress, olive oil is packaged and prepared to trade. Ultimately, both extra virgin olive oil and olive oil are distributed in the market and sold to customers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54248366013 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25242831071 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4754134831 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201035697166 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107917071817 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384299729162 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161102397501 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025386542266 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.