You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should writ | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The illustrate show the amount of people who use railway system by years.Each cities have a different date of open and different length of route.

First of all, Paris and Tokyo have most passenger per year via railways rather than others.Paris has 199 km and opened 1900, Tokyo is 155 km and opened 1927.Other than this Paris and Tokyo have oldest railways after London city.Firstly in Tokyo has a 1927 million people choice underground railway system and this rate of number more than other six cities.After Tokyo,Paris just follow the as a secondly city with number of 1191 million passenger per year.However,beside this cities London has a 775 million passenger each year despite of most long underground railways.

And the other hand, Washington DC has a 144 million per year which is high rather than last two cities.This last two cities are Kyoto and Los Angeles just have approximately same number of people per year.One is 45 million and the other 50 million in one year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The illustrate show the amount of people who use railw...
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Suggestion: Each
... people who use railway system by years.Each cities have a different date of open an...
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Suggestion: All
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Suggestion: Paris
...er year via railways rather than others.Paris has 199 km and opened 1900, Tokyo is 15...
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Suggestion: Other
...d 1900, Tokyo is 155 km and opened 1927.Other than this Paris and Tokyo have oldest r...
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Suggestion: have the oldest
...ed 1927.Other than this Paris and Tokyo have oldest railways after London city.Firstly in T...
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion: After
...te of number more than other six cities.After Tokyo,Paris just follow the as a second...
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Suggestion: , Paris
...r more than other six cities.After Tokyo,Paris just follow the as a secondly city with...
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: , beside
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: One
...ximately same number of people per year.One is 45 million and the other 50 million ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93975903614 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7747225985 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 22.4926829268 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.490018293 43.030603864 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.333333333 112.824112599 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.3333333333 22.9334400587 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 5.23603664747 376% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737949468856 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495283054301 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289246267698 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495283054301 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289246267698 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.2329268293 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.9970731707 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments