You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rele

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

This bar graph depicts the amount of electrical energy generated and used by top ten countries of the world in 2014. The measuring unit is billion kWh.

Overall, china tops the list by consuming and producing the maximum amount of electricity where as korea republic generates the least. All of the countries produce more energy than they consume except for germany. For russia there is not a significant difference in both the numbers.

Firstly china produces and consumes5.398KWh and5322KWh repectively. Secondly the united States generates 4099KWh and uses 3866KWh. russia is on the third number , it generates and uses 1057 kwh and 1038 repectively.It has only a difference of 19KWh in both the data.Japan and india process 936.2 and 871KWh repectively but uses 856.7KWh and 698.8KWh respectively. Canada being on 6th number manufactures and consumes(618.9KWh and 499KWh repectively) slightly less than india. France and brazil generates almost same amount but consumes 561.2Kwh and 455.8KWh respectively.

germany consumes 582.5KWh which is slightly greater than what is produces(526.6).Last but not the least korea republic generates 485.1Kwh and uses only 449.5Kwh.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, third, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59550561798 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.132738538 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.3738813753 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820678270538 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042324606251 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656173592979 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702639722536 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756988160449 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.