You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the changes in population of India and China from the year 2000 and expected growth by the end of 2050. The population is calculated in billions for both the countries.
Overall, the population of India started from a very low point and later it crossed the population of china whether China’s population started from a level higher than that of India but still continued to maintain a constant pace and is expected to be lowered down in coming year.
India started with a population of 1,000 billion in the year 2000 which was less by about 250 million from China but later both the countries population started to grow with a constant speed. By the end of year 2010 India’s population experienced a growth of about 200 billion while China was having the growth of 100 billion approximately. Till 2020 the same trend is followed, India seemed to be approaching China.
After 2020, it is predicted that the total number of people in India will keep on increasing and by the end of 2030 this growth will reach an apex and both the countries will be having same population of 1,450 billion by then. In the next coming years the India’s population is expected to keep on growing and China’s count will be decrementing. By 2050, it is expected that China’s population will reach a down point of about 1,400 billion and India’s population will lead an extreme point of about 1,600 billion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91463414634 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77973888074 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434959349593 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6499979161 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267420219572 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145514770298 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580722879936 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20631358903 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520163269804 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.