Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter -explain the reasons for the noise -apologize -describe what action you will take

Dear Mrs. Jessica,

I am writing this letter in response to your complaint regarding the noise you have been experiencing from my apartment for the last couple of days. I completely understand your concern and apologize for nuisance I have made to you.

As you know, we are doing some renovation at our house considering some upcoming family program. As part of this, we are moving our furniture from one room to another and performing repainting the walls. As because my house is quite big and it is having three bed rooms, the interior decorating process is taking longer time than expected. To make the matter worse, the hired technicians are sometimes dragging their ladders inconsiderately, resulting an unbearable noise experienced at your flat which is just under my floor.

However, I have already made a plan to troubleshoot this soon after getting your letter. I decided to hire more workforce to finish the task as soon as possible and I will also make sure that the process runs only during the office hours so that no one will be there at your home to be disturbed.

I again regret for the disturbances during this process and I really appreciate your tolerance you have shown in the last couple of days.

Yours sincerely,

Kumar S Sampad

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance I have made to you. As you know, we are doing some renovation at our hous...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er and performing repainting the walls. As because my house is quite big and it is...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... there at your home to be disturbed. I again regret for the disturbances durin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, regarding, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92576419214 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81733513147 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8343423281 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351547191212 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114218509903 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965961562001 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21652423611 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102629472305 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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