08/10/2017
You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr. and Ms. Smith,
I am your neighbor next door and although my family moved in a month ago, we have not had a pleasure to meet you personally. The family consists of my wife, my beloved five-year-old daughter and me. The spouse works in a local hospital as a nurse, I am an engineer in big drilling company.
On 2nd March 2017, we are going to celebrate the sixth birthday of my princess. The party starts at 7:00 pm and finishes at 10:00 pm. There will be a small band who will play musical pieces from well-known cartoons and movies. For children, a big and tasty cake has been ordered in a local restaurant that is famous for its sweets, and adult guests will enjoy eating home-cooked barbeque if there is no rain. The party may be a little bit noisy and I hope that it will not disturb you too much.
Finally, I would like to invite you to participate in the celebration. There is no need in buying any presents because just your consent on having the party will be more than enough. Of course, visiting the event appears to be an ideal occasion to learn more about each other, and hopefully, to become friends.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
in big drilling company.
in a big drilling company.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 215 350
No. of Characters: 916 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.829 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.26 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.393 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.423 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.567 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...if there is no rain. The party may be a little bit noisy and I hope that it will not distu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51643192488 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47615087387 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671361502347 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1921016703 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119878938903 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361548242288 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453535127967 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581987735731 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371710799991 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.