08/11/2017You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTel

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08/11/2017
You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing to ask you about a favour. On 29th October 2017, my company held a conference with our investors in your hotel. At the end of this important meeting, an agreement was signed with our Japanese partners. This contract was handed to me but it appears I left it in the hotel. There are two possible locations where the document might have been left. Firstly, I would like you looked at a receptionist desk because my colleagues and I were in a hurry when we checked out and the papers could be forgotten there. Another possible place is my room. Perhaps, the document is safely preserved on a coffee table.

Those papers are so important because this is a pivotal contract for our company that could pave a way to bigger contracts. Asking the partners to sign the document again will be seen as a demonstration of disrespect and poor discipline in our firm. In addition, the Japanese group flew to Japan, and it will cost a small fortune to meet them in person because airplane tickets cost about four thousand and five hundred dollars per person in each direction.

I would like that you contacted me as soon as you find the lost agreement. Then it can be sent to my office via DHL express or one of my co-workers who lives in your area can deliver the contract to me personally. Please inform me what you prefer.

I am waiting for your prompt response.

Sincerely yours,

Eugene Dubinchuk.

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Average: 7.5 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...s and I were in a hurry when we checked out and the papers could be forgotten there...
^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our prompt response. Sincerely yours, Eugene Dubinchuk.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6328125 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56611787288 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5018926821 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.125 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203101156572 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608810227671 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654662684656 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973668387656 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860758065983 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

In addition, the Japanese group flew to Japan,
In addition, the Japanese group has flown to Japan,

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 256 250
No. of Characters: 1136 1200
No. of Different Words: 159 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.438 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.474 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.653 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.278 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5