1. You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority.In your letter, you should tell:
* explain how you knew about the plans
* describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood
* suggest a possible solution to the problem.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my concern regarding the planning of a new airport in our city that is approved by the central government recently.
After the meeting of local authority members yesterday, there is a column in The Times of India which states the plan of action being followed to achieve its development within the next three years. This could be beneficial for the industries already set up here, but could impact the biodiversity and people in the vicinity.
Developing an airport from scratch will be needing to dig out the land, and this will add a great deal of dust particles to the surroundings. Although most people in this area are young, the flora and fauna in the city garden would not be able to survive in such harsh conditions.
I would really appreciate it if your team could identify such hotspots where the development might create hazardous pollutants. Once they will get this information, you can request the authority to construct the air-purifiers around these places.
I am hoping that you will take immediate action on this issue.
Yours Faithfully,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...Developing an airport from scratch will be needing to dig out the land, and this will add ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73792613604 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689839572193 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0533775118 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161036345321 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628448663936 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425081627915 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751470898609 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367203781883 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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