25 10 2017 You have been to a business meeting at another company and saw a piece of equipment which can be useful for your company too Write a letter to your manager about the following Describe the piece of equipment you have seen Why having the same eq

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25 10 2017 You have been to a business meeting at another company and saw a piece of equipment which can be useful for your company too Write a letter to your manager about the following Describe the piece of equipment you have seen Why having the same eq

Dear Mr. Manager,

I am writing this letter to present with you that I enyoyed the meeting of ViVo company. they are planing to use modern technology in their work, so they shared a serious of new machine. I noticed a type of device which is good for our factory.

Forklift truck which I recognized it so helpful. it is a special designed with lots of parts such as cab, carriage, mast, load backrest, tires, power supply, tilt cylinder, especially two long forks which like arms that are attached to the carriage. they are used to support the load from the bottom.

In term of merits, there are several reasons to explain how it is necessary. Firstly, the device can help people to load, unload, shipping or recieve warehouse items and stacking them to assigned places.Another is help us to save money and time. In fact, if we do not use this equipment, we spend much payment for hiring work-force to move and arrange heavy products.

After reading my suggestions, I hope that you consider and have a clear plan to apply this machine in our company.

I hope you reflect my suggestions as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

TOM

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... I enyoyed the meeting of ViVo company. they are planing to use modern technology in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...truck which I recognized it so helpful. it is a special designed with lots of part...
^^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...arms that are attached to the carriage. they are used to support the load from the b...
^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to supporting'.
Suggestion: used to supporting
... are attached to the carriage. they are used to support the load from the bottom. In term of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...ms and stacking them to assigned places.Another is help us to save money and time. In f...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57984495658 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2590511473 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138689332982 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457540088778 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326914606257 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661914184713 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296369551742 0.0580467560999 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... I enyoyed the meeting of ViVo company. they are planing to use modern technology in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...truck which I recognized it so helpful. it is a special designed with lots of part...
^^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...arms that are attached to the carriage. they are used to support the load from the b...
^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to supporting'.
Suggestion: used to supporting
... are attached to the carriage. they are used to support the load from the bottom. In term of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...ms and stacking them to assigned places.Another is help us to save money and time. In f...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57984495658 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2590511473 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138689332982 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457540088778 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326914606257 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661914184713 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296369551742 0.0580467560999 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.