Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern life, peope’s life a hustle and hectic, I means that they are working over time. So, they are not spend much time for interest. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then I will give my own perspective.
On the one side, there are several merits when we are working extra hours. Firstly, they work tirelessly because they want to earn too much money to support their family. For instane, if they need to buy new televison but they do not have enough budget,so many people must be work harder. Moreover, citizens believe that they try so much in work because they can learn more experience in their job. Occupation’s skill are useful for new employee, with hand-on eperience they can create high quality products
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that in fact working so much can effect on phycical health. People have this opinion beause if you do not join to free time activities can cause of streesful. Spare time act help you relieve strain and eased your nervousness. A second point is that freedom hobby could make new friends, and well-buid relationship with everybody. To illustrate, making new connections might have wide open in co-operation with everyone.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that human can organize their time in a good way. After working hard, they should doing outdoor activities to improve their mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
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Suggestion: spent
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Suggestion: , so
...vison but they do not have enough budget,so many people must be work harder. Moreov...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ight have wide open in co-operation with everyone. In conclusion, I believe both...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivities to improve their mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4702520454 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.171301715 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.875 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172883293125 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558734561213 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379767672831 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100847156472 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300579100758 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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