8. You have had problems with a changing room in a sports center. You have made some complaints but nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the manager stating:
– The issues with the changing rooms
– What has been done about it
– What you want the Manager to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to convey my inconvenience with the roommate in sports center and requesting you to change my room. I am Arun, staying in room no 101 along with Shekar. He is the one who has more friends circle and do lot of parties during late night. Actually, this is disturbing me a lot with my studies where I like to read in a peaceful environment.
Already I have explained about my situation to my roommate but didn't find any change from him. So, now I thought to write a complaint to you by expecting for an immediate action regarding this issue. I want to change my room and share with a friend who is not with a party minded and allocate much of his time in reading. Indeed, it will be pleasure if you can allocate a room with such a person who keep his room clean without any messy. At the same time, it is much comfortable to study if the roomie is from my class.
Thanking You for considering my problem. I hereby look forward for your response soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Arun.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to convey my inconveni...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like to read in a peaceful environment. Already I have explained about my situat...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...d about my situation to my roommate but didnt find any change from him. So, now I tho...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your response soon. Yours Sincerely, Arun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34920634921 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49835196653 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2552209769 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248968892676 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845285082629 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735216834559 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157871328921 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630028642661 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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