After being involved in an accident you were looked after by a person you did not know before Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude In your letter Introduce yourself and let him her know why you are writing Express your appreciation A

Essay topics:

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.

In your letter:

Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing

Express your appreciation

And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my sincere appreciation for your kind gesture. I am Anand, whom you took great care of when I was bedridden after an accident. Please allow me to explain.

Things were as usual when I started for office last Sunday. However, odds were stacked against me on that day as I crashed head-on with a car that was driving on the wrong side of the road. I was informed later that, as a head-nurse, you took extraordinary care of me when I was lying unconscious in the hospital. Although It may sound like your responsibility, taking care of someone who is not known with such a kind heart is stupendous. In spite of the injuries and profuse blood loss, I was able to recover so quickly because of your motherly care.

I want to appreciate and thank you for your sincere effort. As I am still recovering, please consider this as my personal invite and visit my home with your family.

Hoping for a favourable response from you and eagerly waiting for you!

Yours sincerely,
Anand.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, still, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64130434783 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64155035534 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0366352441 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6363636364 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263843319945 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984559251993 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084985649238 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172226496727 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604319382016 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.