Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Mass media such as television and newspapers are commercialized to an extent that people are losing faith in the integrity of the news published. The News Editors play a crucial role in this aspect as they pick the stories that are only sensational. It leads to broadcasting more negative news such as murders and dacoities.. This trend has to change in order to have a healthy society in the future.
To begin with, It has become quite common now that media is controlled by corporate houses. It is no longer an entity which runs for the welfare of the society or country and profit making has become the sole target. As a result, news editors are left with no choice other than following their promoters orders. This has resulted in broadcasting news items that could sell as hot cakes. This money minded thought process has done more harm than good to the current generation.
On the other hand, People are equally responsible for creation of such a unhealthy environment today. If the people has not fallen for such frivolous news and rejected it, the objective of the industry would have changed a lot better. For example, the news of a murder telecasted with a narration and screenplay equivalent to a short film can be discouraged. The future of the current generation can be shaped efficiently if more positive news and articles are given priority. Therefore, corporate houses and people shall work in tandem to mutually benefit from each other.
Summing up, the stakeholders and promoters should start looking the news industry as a sacred medium to influence and kindle the positivity in the society rather than as a money making entities. Equally, people have a larger role to play in it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87285223368 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65983821233 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2706115626 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119216063611 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392400608216 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357833965715 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723256644027 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406050255642 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.