Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Apart from working in a news agency, the News Editors main job is to choose what information needs to be broadcast on television and articles published in the newspaper. I think that news should be genuine and immediately reported irrespective of good or bad kind of news.
To commence with, I believe the decision of content that needs to be shared with the public is based on the three major factors. Broadly, the first one is authenticity and crime stories which need to be covered immediately to alert the citizens. Emergency alerts like tsunamis and floods are broadcasted continuously. The second one is the question of which story or article will be profitable to the company. From per business perspective, the news which are more flashy will earn more. Furthermore, few people like to watch some columns like the economy, sports, art, and accommodation more like commercial articles. The makes a whole bunch of information as per the survey, the editor tries to catch the eye of diverse viewers.
However, to entertain yourself, people have become addicted to watching bad news. This is because most people like learning thrilling news unless it is not related to someone. For instance, the column, a weekly episode of Crime Patrol is the most-watched about bad news. If this remains to continue for a few more years, people can have a bad influence on others. To balance the mindset of the people, the good news should be reported more compared to the negative news. This will help to inspire those who are in actual need provided that the bad ones are not that important to be skipped.
To sum up, in order to maintain the balance in society, the content is to be purely decided on the basis of the need of an hour. However, there should be a separate page of news which is good too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to thrill'.
Suggestion: to thrill
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, apart from, for instance, i think, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76996805112 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62354210666 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1562590669 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109417329932 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365417860314 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388996956479 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771621756574 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491219482892 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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