You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
• describe what the accident was
• explain when it happened
• suggest how the damage can be fixed.
Dear Matt,
Hope your trip went well…!!
I am writing to apologise for the loss have caused in my presence when you were away.
I know you might have felt awful, looking at your glass wares. It happened on Saturday evening and was so sudden within a frame of second. While cleaning the kitchen floor I accidently stepped upon tablecloth on which the all the plates glass were set to dine, therefore it slipped, and this is how the all wares got slipped and broken down into the pieces.
Although I was feeling sad at first as I am responsible, but do not worry, I immediately amended the chaos and replaced them with new dining set. Again, I am so sorry about the damage caused. Please forgive me and I would make sure in the future. Rest I’ll explain when we meetup. Till then Take care...!!
Love & Warm Regards,
Mess
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, so, then, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54666666667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29435554469 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.773333333333 0.622605031667 124% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3974662838 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7777777778 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180872894538 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621274473599 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672284486826 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839163330455 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510151259557 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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