Write about the following topic:
‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Write about the following topic:
‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that the traditional culture have been passed through generation. Many people argue that children do not respect their parents as compared to the ancestors. This attitude is now can be seen in the society. In this essay I will discuss the reason for the mentioned issue along with the relevant example.
To start with,the reason to the cause is that in today's world the softness to their respective kids has been increasing in century by century. To nuture the child, the father's technique in late 1960s was to scare him/her and teach them in their own way. It used to help them teaching their kid to behave kids with good manners and respect. Because the generation was disciplined, there was respect for qualities like love, respect, honesty. For example, the asian culture is know for their disciplinary teaching.
On the other hand, the parenting technique has been modified as years passing by throughout the generation. The children nowadays are pampared and thaught politely. The majority of kids take parent's love for granted. Even though they get good learning, they lack moral values. Moreover, the crime rates have been increased. For instance, the count of murder, theft has increased since last few decades. Futhermore, there is no fear to parent.
To conclude, Despite of teaching good values to their children, the parent might not be hard on them. Thus, having no respect for their parents, the shape of the society in today's era is traanforming to the toxic environment.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...h the relevant example. To start with,the reason to the cause is that in todays w...
^^^^
Line 11, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fathers'' or 'father's'?
Suggestion: fathers'; father's
...ry by century. To nuture the child, the fathers technique in late 1960s was to scare hi...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 276, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to teach' or 'teach'.
Suggestion: to teach; teach
... in their own way. It used to help them teaching their kid to behave kids with good man...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o help them teaching their kid to behave kids with good manners and respect. Beca...
^^
Line 11, column 477, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...esty. For example, the asian culture is know for their disciplinary teaching. On ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, as to, at least, for example, for instance, no doubt, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07213114754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55026333012 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2889459473 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3181818182 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8636363636 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47777043263 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114104762788 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129143423816 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231584281589 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163776189464 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...h the relevant example. To start with,the reason to the cause is that in todays w...
^^^^
Line 11, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fathers'' or 'father's'?
Suggestion: fathers'; father's
...ry by century. To nuture the child, the fathers technique in late 1960s was to scare hi...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 276, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to teach' or 'teach'.
Suggestion: to teach; teach
... in their own way. It used to help them teaching their kid to behave kids with good man...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o help them teaching their kid to behave kids with good manners and respect. Beca...
^^
Line 11, column 477, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...esty. For example, the asian culture is know for their disciplinary teaching. On ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, as to, at least, for example, for instance, no doubt, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07213114754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55026333012 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2889459473 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3181818182 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8636363636 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47777043263 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114104762788 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129143423816 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231584281589 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163776189464 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.