Write about the following topic:
‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In the current era, we have observed that children do not respect their parents like in earlier times. Eventually, this strange behaviour is creating a negative impact on society. It is often argued that this is not the correct way of parenting, while other believe that it is happening due to the generation gap. This article agrees that the main reason behind this unexpected behaviour is the parenting issue. This essay will discuss both views.
It is quite common that parents are not communicating well within themselves which is creating a wrong impact in children's minds. Children learn the basic communication etiquette from their parents. But, it is often observed that parents are not respecting each other while doing general conversations. It is therefore completely agreed that changing way of showing respect is resulting from their own parents. Eventually, they stop respecting them. For example, due to various professional or personal issues working parents are not behaving well with each other which is affecting their children massively.
In the other hand, aged people in society trust that due to the generation gap kids are neglecting the old ways to show respect towards only the older generation. Current generation believes that respect is a give-and-take policy. Hence, they tend to express negative way of behaviour if they don’t get the same. So, this essay disagrees that children are only behaving following their parents. For example, our society follows some ethics which younger people never follow the same.
It has been noticed that in past children used to respect their parents whereas nowadays, they don't. That's why, negative thoughts are affecting the society a lot. I personally experienced similar behaviour recently from a school student who behaved wrongly with an old aged person. However, in my opinion, we should know the possible ways to respect others or own parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28664495114 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64400425919 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2905391966 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.15 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306444840323 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934467124197 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401017028008 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189257328076 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224962913522 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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