The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?
While some people argue that the leaders or the directors of companies are mostly older ones, others say that young people also have the potential to be leaders. I agree with both statements and in this essay, I will explain my view along with supporting examples.
To start with, in today's age, there is no doubt that well-renowned firms or organizations were established a few decades ago. Similarly, the founders have grown with them too. Their hard work, consistency, and leadership are the key qualities that have kept the bodies operating for ages. For instance, the multinational service-based company Tata and the director Rata Tata both have grown older. together.
Furthermore, the leaders not only lead the team, but they work hard to make it happen and reach the goal. For example, Infosys co-founder Narayan Murthy used to work for 70 hours a week initially to work on the startup, now called the Infosys firm.
However, now these leaders can say that youngsters do not have the potential to be leaders. That can be proved wrong because these directors or leaders were also determined at a younger age when they started investing their time and money. Additionally, people nowadays are more aware and educated and, also have their business strategies following the leadership ideologies. Technology advancements can be another factor. For instance, businessman Akash Ambani founded his organization by following the footsteps of his father who is a great businessman. There are many such Entrepreneurs and startups inlined as a career goal of many people.
To sum up, Although, the management team of firms might fall into the senior citizens age group, I believe and agree that young people can also lead in their way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Together
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my view, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1298245614 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76807193227 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2944115953 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312688615111 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926433332197 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120715931029 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16935448622 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124539737119 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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