A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am writing with regards to the job opportunity available as a waitress at your hotel Madison.
To begin with, I am a full-time student who is pursuing a post-graduation course in the Conestoga college. No wonder this country is beautiful, but due to recession, I am unable to get any work here. Yesterday my friend read an article and informed me about open role advertisement.
I am interested in this opportunity and I have 6 months experience as a cashier ,server, and helper. The work location is 2 kilometers away, so it will be easier and convinient for me. My availability is anytime from monday to saturday until 10 p.m.
However, in order to arrange the tuition fee for next semester, I have to urgently onboard on this job. Therefore, I can come tomorrow for interview if you are fine with it.
I am looking forward hearing from you soon.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... I have 6 months experience as a cashier ,server, and helper. The work location is...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98781767822 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707602339181 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9988425754 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214178830149 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741813673557 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542406526552 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902788652861 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656927172868 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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