Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that everybody wants to live in ideal surroundings. Many people often believe that the government and large companies are the only chance to improve the environment and that individuals cannot differentiate. I partially disagree with the statement and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.
To begin with, the states and the industries have the power to develop society inevitably. The federals can plan in order to carry out the improvisation amongst the city in varied ways. For instance, In order to keep the roads clean in Mumbai, the government imposed a new law to fine people who litter around while gazing, so that the citizen ay abide by the law, and eventually as per statistics, nearly 45 % of the city was cleaned within a month. Although on a large scale basis they cannot monitor the public single-handedly. To overcome such a situation, they may assign a task to some person with the responsibility of cleanliness. Also, there are many other issues like pollutions, increasing crime rates, discrimination, lack of education, poverty.
However, we as an individual can try to avoid mishaps as much as possible by believing in ourselves and others, respecting each other avoid conflicts even in the small scales. Also, we should take a pledge to be an ideal citizen who will make an effort in improvisation by all means possible. Although it is undeniable that as a single man it is difficult, but we can initiate it from our homes by treating and respecting each one equally, also avoid miscreants to ruin our area, make sure to follow the customs, pay the tax. Each living being will be beneficial with our baby steps one day.
To sum up, Although, the companies and the law system can change the environmental conditions on a big and immediate level, we as citizens can together make a whole lot of difference in order to make society a good place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of the city was cleaned within a month. Although on a large scale basis they cannot moni...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...vel, we as citizens can together make a whole lot of difference in order to make society ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85889570552 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89641356386 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.388880812 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178280509355 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526512138142 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717991082899 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116650514701 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591136889415 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.