A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper Write a letter to the restaurant applying for the job In your letter explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when

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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.

Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:

explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview

Dear Ms
This is pourya mirzaei writing. After having seen your advertisement in the newspaper about working in the restaurant, I would like to take a part as a waiter.
Not until a month ago did I come to Hamedan city for educational purposes. I study economics at a university and I am looking for a job close to my place. I suppose I can hold my own in this job as I had been working in a restaurant before I came to Hamedan.Also I able to speak in French and English, therefore, there will be no need to worry about this issue any tourist come to the restaurant. in fact, I am totally free right now nevertheless I just can work in the afternoon however I would be there whenever is possible to have an interview for this job. I look for word to your reply , thank you in advance and good luck.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...n a restaurant before I came to Hamedan.Also I able to speak in French and English, ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n a restaurant before I came to Hamedan.Also I able to speak in French and English, ...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...sue any tourist come to the restaurant. in fact, I am totally free right now never...
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Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... this job. I look for word to your reply , thank you in advance and good luck.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, i suppose, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19480519481 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6819316815 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5888092917 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 4.34317383033 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27444545191 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113656199306 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514711625064 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200481399611 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375487424487 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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