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life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
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To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many sociologists have represented the Idea that technology has made a huge impact on people’s lifestyles from the past. In other words, traditional methods of living are going to be forgotten in the following years. I totally agree with this opinion with some definite reason to explain.
Firstly, as technology has progressed people have felt much more comfortable in their life. obviously, people want to experience convenience in every aspect of their life. for example, with the developments of machines employees do not have to deal with some fatigues task; therefore, working is much more effortless from the past. To put it more simply, the delegation of the tasks to the robots and machines has made less tension in people's work-life balance.
Secondly, assuming that traditional skills of making a living had been done by people in the past; however, these methods are not valued in present. people have a strong urge for earning money. Ironically, the new technology has created numerous chances to make people rich. some people are earning money just by using a computer connected to the internet. moreover, this phenomenon has encouraged a lot of people to learn new skills of living. for example, how to use a computer or how to invest their money and manage the finance; therefore, they can quit their previous traditional jobs and start new skills with the new equipment. Indeed people in 21 century are experiencing tremendous storms of changes and these are mainly because of the new technologies. As this trend is going to continue, the last methods would be forgotten because the new technology is better than the previous one. With the acceleration of people living tempo, it is impossible to keep them alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75466120333 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.80390392 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150575026983 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530521580273 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453593173364 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109811039587 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189154607031 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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