You are working for a company You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this Write a letter to your manager In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and
want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Alex,
Despite the vaccines that I got last month, I have got coronavirus, and I am postponing my duties for at least two weeks due to my doctor's advice
Unfortunately, I'm not feeling good enough to work in the office. And I need to rest and keep myself hydrated. besides, this virus can be contagious, so I would contaminate other colleagues. also doctor said there is no evidence of lung inflammation, but I have to be cautious about my oxygen in the blood. So I have to stay at home and check my condition constantly.
The doctor asked me to stay at home and isolate myself in a room for two weeks. but I'm going to take a COVID-19 test by next week to check whether I can get back to work sooner or not. but if it gets critical, I have to cancel all tasks and go to the hospital for more maintenance.

I have delegated some tasks to my colleague, John, he is now responsible for responding to phone calls, and here, I will continue to complete our projects with my laptop.also I will answer emails as far as I can stand.thank you for your understanding

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ue to my doctors advice Unfortunately, Im not feeling good enough to work in the ...
^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... need to rest and keep myself hydrated. besides, this virus can be contagious, so I wou...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...o I would contaminate other colleagues. also doctor said there is no evidence of lun...
^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...o I would contaminate other colleagues. also doctor said there is no evidence of lun...
^^^^
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...isolate myself in a room for two weeks. but Im going to take a COVID-19 test by nex...
^^^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ate myself in a room for two weeks. but Im going to take a COVID-19 test by next w...
^^
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...r I can get back to work sooner or not. but if it gets critical, I have to cancel a...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stand.thank you for your understanding
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38693467337 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79508130165 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4981481227 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111562240727 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389941172191 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318492762603 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608371237165 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346683248837 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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