More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that the professionals are migrating to the developed nations.Many people think that the huge flock to resources are getting stealed from poor to rich nations, while the other believe that it is organic to move around the world.I certainly agree to the latter statement. In this essay I will express my views along with the relevant examples.
To start with, people travel overseas in search of opportunities. The majority of specialists fly to the developed nations making the developing countries more poor. It is because the skilled workers earn benefits to the country making the curreny higher. For example, the IT industry in the Asian countries are now considered as an Offshore whereas the western countries are known as onshore where clients. Additonally, this movement has an adverse effect on a nation as whole.The hike of inflation is one of the inevitably challenge is faced by the world.
However, in the defence of the skilled resources, they believe that it works as a chain pattern. In order to earn more income many professionals trade their skills in return of high value money. The primary reason is to upgrade their lifestyle. For instance, Vast Asian crowd has moved to Canada to improve their family income status. Furthermore, another reason is curreny rate difference amongst North American countries.
In my opinion, even though the nations are facing challenges due to shift of population to western side, I moderately agree that one can possibly try their luck and lookout for their family and nation too.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
... are migrating to the developed nations.Many people think that the huge flock to res...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... it is organic to move around the world.I certainly agree to the latter statement...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...making the curreny higher. For example, the IT industry in the Asian countries are now...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... an adverse effect on a nation as whole.The hike of inflation is one of the inevita...
^^^
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...stern side, I moderately agree that one can possibly try their luck and lookout for their fa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their luck and lookout for their family and nation too.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10546875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69427912709 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4521671402 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193666016165 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550829906222 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646804236496 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982756043111 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07938900577 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
... are migrating to the developed nations.Many people think that the huge flock to res...
^^^^
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... it is organic to move around the world.I certainly agree to the latter statement...
^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...making the curreny higher. For example, the IT industry in the Asian countries are now...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... an adverse effect on a nation as whole.The hike of inflation is one of the inevita...
^^^
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...stern side, I moderately agree that one can possibly try their luck and lookout for their fa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their luck and lookout for their family and nation too.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10546875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69427912709 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4521671402 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193666016165 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550829906222 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646804236496 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982756043111 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07938900577 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.