You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in great health. I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the overall service at your restaurant mainly, the food.
My name is Gordon Ramsey and I am your regular customer who comes here for occasions, but this time, It was my birthday and I wanted to give a treat to my parents and I would like you to know what all went wrong on that night.
At first, I ordered some delicacies as usual but, my order was placed late and so was the food. On top of that, the food was a bit salty which ruined the taste of it food.
Furthermore, I tried asking the server to change the order and then they closed the counter for no reason. We walked away directly as there was no other option left.
Therefore, I would like you to give my feedback that I am extremely unhappy about the service and the same review is posted on Google. Kindly refund the money or send a voucher for a free meal to compensate.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Gordon Ramsey
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, look, so, then, therefore, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39285714286 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32524915478 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5418469156 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169525846691 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635806680317 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752536824764 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905575845227 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101982983514 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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