You recently bought an electronic device for your home. Your friend wants to buy the same device and has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
describe the device
please explain why you bought it
say whether or not your friend should buy it and why.
Dear Thomas,
I am writing to suggest you about the device, which I have bought recently during the Diwali Sale. Let me explain.
Do you remember? I had a vaccum cleaner and it gave my family a good company for aorund 4 years. One day it stopped working and there was no scope to be repaired. Therefore, I was bound to purchase the new one of brand Dyson. Though the product is similar, but the color is blue.
Unfortuanely, I had to buy branded vacuum cleaner as there was no other option. It cost me around two hundred dollars including a discount.
However, this device is expensive and I would like to recommend to think and decide carefully. Although the product is really good, I would suggest you visit the store and check once. Moreover, if it is not that required, you can wait till the next sale.
I look forward to hearing from you.
warm regards,
Janie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend thinking'.
Suggestion: recommend thinking
...device is expensive and I would like to recommend to think and decide carefully. Although the prod...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
... I look forward to hearing from you. warm regards, Janie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60126582278 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41680180001 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696202531646 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2003110132 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.9285714286 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2857142857 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104245603706 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307596326027 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028662585356 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560254836915 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321023088646 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.