You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills What are the causes Suggest possible solutions Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant ex

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

You should write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt, in order to handle and maintain clients, soft skills should be a must. Few people think that new joiners lack co-operative skills. In this essay, I will mention the possible reasons behind the previous statement and also, will suggest solutions to it.

To start with, The trainee lack interpersonal skills to manage business. Mainly because the new employee can be the student pass out. Although, the skills and values are taught in the student life, some did not practically learn in their work life. For example, HR scolds the pass outs initially at the o-boarding session. They skip the ethics and culture implementation in the office. Another reason can be that, the trainings are conducted improperly where the social skills and core values are wrongly inculcated. Additionally, some times mew employee are locked to the new assignment independently without having mentor.

However, to eradicate such situations the employer or management should make sure to train the freshers rigorously. They should also held a workshop frequently to handle the situations. For instance, a dedicated HR team looks after conducting seminars in an IT industry. Another solution can be. an employee should shadow under mentors for few months before independently deploying to the assignment. Further more, there should be quarterly meetings on the performance review. Apart from this, an individual should behave formally with some skills such as team player, leadership quality, and punctuality.

To sum up, some freshers lack cooperative skills initially as they the environment changes significantly around them and training is the best possible suggestion to such complaints.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, apart from, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, to start with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44866920152 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87593764941 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0176763124 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6111111111 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270530912964 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719587507442 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04487742684 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161927440972 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116068389716 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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