You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
• describe what the accident was
• explain when it happened
• suggest how the damage can be fixed.
Dear Khushbu,
How are you? I am fine and I am sorry for making wrong setting in your Television. Actually, I was trying to set brightness of your Television so that that it could be good for all TV watchers, but it did not work well.
Well, after watching some movies and dramas on your television, my eyes were straining so I realised that Televiosion’s britness is not set properly, and this could be deleterious for anyone’s eyes. That was the only intention I was trying to reset brightness. However, by mistake any other switch was pressed by me and your Television was stopped suddenly.
This incident had happened on third day, it was quarter to ten, when I was watching songs, even I remember the exact time because I was feeling anxiety and worring that If would have damaged seroiusly. The more I was trying to solve, the more I was getting confused.
Luckily, I have found someone who is master to repair television. His name is Sanjay and he has his shop near by your areas too. I got his contact detail from one my bosom friends, he also had the same isssue and had solved by Sanjay with very reasonable cost. Moreover, I will pay for whole cost.
See you soon.
Yours loving,
Rehana Diwan
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...to set brightness of your Television so that that it could be good for all TV watchers, b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had damaged'?
Suggestion: had damaged
...was feeling anxiety and worring that If would have damaged seroiusly. The more I was trying to sol...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... His name is Sanjay and he has his shop near by your areas too. I got his contact detai...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, third, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5871559633 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54361831025 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8569694866 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4285714286 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200088288549 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071750069891 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441123454464 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101347890711 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193641686073 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...to set brightness of your Television so that that it could be good for all TV watchers, b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had damaged'?
Suggestion: had damaged
...was feeling anxiety and worring that If would have damaged seroiusly. The more I was trying to sol...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... His name is Sanjay and he has his shop near by your areas too. I got his contact detai...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, third, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5871559633 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54361831025 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8569694866 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4285714286 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200088288549 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071750069891 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441123454464 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101347890711 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193641686073 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.