Some people think that computers and the Internet are more important for a child's education than going to school. But Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education is not only essential for any child but the method is being used equally vital. The majority of people reckon that rather than going to school, computers and the internet are more crucial whereas a large number of people ponder that educational institutions and tutors are necessary for kids to learn effectively. While I concur with the later notion because it teaches with practical examples.
To initiate with, If kids learn with computers and the internet, the kid will not face any peer pressure and no any strict regulations will be there which kid needs to follow. To be more clearer, the child can learn either its suitable timing or as per mood, because with such device there is no restriction in regards to timing and mood. For instance, currently, my niece can attend her school at home, and owing to these online classes she has become more creative and enthralled to learn. Another reason is that due to homely study kid can save precious time which can be utilized in some other activities such as sports, arts or any other. This can assist kids to recognized any creativity if they are god gifted. Eventually, learning on computers and the internet is the best method.
On the other side, if kids have been attending classes at school, they would have learned some practical skills which are not possible to learn anywhere like starting a conversation spontaneously, playing in the ground with a group of mates, and having a competition with peers either in exams or sports. These activities instill better behavior since childhood. For example, one of my friends was not good in academics but she is good in business because she had learned some rational skills while schooling. Furthermore, unless kids cannot learn to compete with peers if they do not go to school. In recent times, it is must learn to compete, otherwise, kids cannot get the desired result in life race. Ultimately, schools prepare kids for foreseeable future.
In my opinion, schools are the only place where kids have the opportunity to act independently to any reaction because they are not surrounded by their guardians.
In conclusion, even though online learning can save time and help to develop some other useful skills, physical schooling can shape kids in all aspects. According to me, school learning is the only best method.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...kid will not face any peer pressure and no any strict regulations will be there wh...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'clearer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: clearer
... there which kid needs to follow. To be more clearer, the child can learn either its suitabl...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ith such device there is no restriction in regards to timing and mood. For instance, currentl...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...chooling can shape kids in all aspects. According to me, school learning is the only best metho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93908629442 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5821851555 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55076142132 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.035223125 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.111111111 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249340705667 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089139621966 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702257091815 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155329332281 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712282422944 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.