Today more people are shopping online than ever before.
Why do people choose to shop in this way?
Are there disadvantages to shopping online?
Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern technology has made our life most easier than before. Just because of that nowadays people would like to buy things online rather than going in markets. As per my perspective this is a negetive development. In following paragraph I will expalin both reasons and cons of this trend with suitable example.
Firstly, the prominant reasons for this is time. If we go for shopping in markets than its consumes our precious time which is most crucial for working professionals. For example, one survey conducted by Times of India with busy working personnels, and they told that doing online shooping save their time as well as there is no chance to get deplorable product. Secondly, not only is it saving time but also it gives us surety for the best products. Like this online portals are adhered by law that they can not deliver faulty products. Thus, masses would like to buy products from e-commerce store.
On the contrary, It is having its major demerits too, like if people will not go out for shopping than small street vendors will suffer financial lose. Apart from this, even those people who buy online will have less physical movement. Owing to this they might start to live sedentary lifestyle which is exceptionally perious for longer run. For example, One survey conducted by WHO , and had declared that going out for shopping is best exercise. More than that people feel rejuvnet while they do shopping from malls or markets. So these are negetive aspects of this trend.
As per my view, This is not beneficial for byures as well as for street sellors. Because this make vendors more poorer. Which is most harmfull for their immidiate family members too.
In conclusion, after analysing both view it is crystal clear view that its disadvantages outweigh its merits. Although online shopping is time saving, it is perilous for human physic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
Modern technology has made our life most easier than before. Just because of that nowad...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gs online rather than going in markets. As per my perspective this is a negetive d...
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r byures as well as for street sellors. Because this make vendors more poorer. Which is...
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Message: Use only 'poorer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: poorer
...reet sellors. Because this make vendors more poorer. Which is most harmfull for their immid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94006309148 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43785137747 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7570308204 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5714285714 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0952380952 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201175928408 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623353884949 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570052755325 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115737804101 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538651494303 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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