Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In this modern era, crime rates have been mushrooming in the world which can have detrimental impacts on human beings. Clans of masses ponder that the optimum way to abate crime is to keep law-breakers in a prison for a long time, whereas few folks opine that there are some best options to eradicate crime. I agree with later notion which I will elaborate with suitable illustrations in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, making long imprisonment is the best punishment ever. Because humans just waste their precious time in prison and realize how huge mistakes they have made. Prison is really a big curse for anyone. There you can only seat and have most criminals surrounded by you, which gives you negative feelings all the time. For example, In India imprisonment is very long, so most of the people would not like to spend time in prison. After some time you feel monotonous and tedious. Secondly, Long imprisonment lessens your attachment with your family members. Which affects you a lot on your mind. Even your family members also have less empathy towards them. Thus, long prison is the best according to some mankind.
On the other hand, there are numerous ways that can be helpful to diminish crime. Firstly, if anyone commits a crime sent one's to the country's border to secure that particular nation with no salary for a particular time. Like this we can reduce soldiers cost as well as we have most aggressive personnel to fight with others during in any emergency. For example, Bhutan sends their criminals at border. Owing to this in Bhutan we can see lowest crime of the World. Secondly, Government can send them in Old age homes or orphanage homes where they can realize real meaning of life and can develop sympathy for needy people. Unless they will feel anything, they will same even after long imprisonment. Thus, these other options are also best. Like this we can have both the side win-win situation.
According to me, we can give them a task to clean public areas like Gardens, Temples, Mosque, High-ways, commercial buildings and such like. So we can have less burden on legislations treasury as well as people feel shyness in public. Hence, they will avoid doing crime.
In conclusion, even though long prison is the best way to change one's mindset, there are abundant ways that can give us fruitful results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42358985447 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558312655087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9317515387 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1153846154 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42307692308 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21057964153 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590394118612 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463301043648 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125743505288 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368026550266 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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