It was predicted that, with the development of technology, people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past. To what extent has this prediction come true?
In this modern era, lots of new technology has developed by experts, owing to this trend, it is been assumed that, individuals will have more leisure time in 21st century. I believe that It would turned compeletely wrong because inflation and desires will arise a lot which will not be allow persons to enjoy fee time. Which I will demonstrate with suitable illustrations in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, if everything will be done by machines, most of the population might become lazy and can lead to sedentary lifestyle due to this only a few percentage of individuals will be working. So, in every field production will decrease and demand will increase. This trend can lead to severe inflation in upcoming time. For instance, in America, inflation is very hight, the reason is the same.Thus, the advancement of technology will not have any change to current senario.
Secondly, if they will have extra time then they will be in favour of another income source rather than spending quality time for leisure activities because they would have become more materialist minded. And they will be requiring all those things which they would not have at current stage. In short, their desire and longing for things will arise to huge extent.For example, one of my friend, who has million of money still she rarely gets time for herself. And always complain that she does not have enough time for her own health.
In conclusion, although advanced technology can bring a lot of extra time, they would face issue with inflation and materialist world.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
...n 21st century. I believe that It would turned compeletely wrong because inflation and...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not be allow persons to enjoy fee time. Which I will demonstrate with suitable illust...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'few percentages'.
Suggestion: few percentages
... sedentary lifestyle due to this only a few percentage of individuals will be working. So, in ...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...n is very hight, the reason is the same.Thus, the advancement of technology will not...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ng for things will arise to huge extent.For example, one of my friend, who has mill...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
....For example, one of my friend, who has million of money still she rarely gets time for...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58125640249 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5638617229 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166456690197 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699673971193 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529059680996 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112422071318 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362122795898 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
...n 21st century. I believe that It would turned compeletely wrong because inflation and...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not be allow persons to enjoy fee time. Which I will demonstrate with suitable illust...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'few percentages'.
Suggestion: few percentages
... sedentary lifestyle due to this only a few percentage of individuals will be working. So, in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...n is very hight, the reason is the same.Thus, the advancement of technology will not...
^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ng for things will arise to huge extent.For example, one of my friend, who has mill...
^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
....For example, one of my friend, who has million of money still she rarely gets time for...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58125640249 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5638617229 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166456690197 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699673971193 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529059680996 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112422071318 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362122795898 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.