Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport However it is no longer the main form of transport What are the reasons What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population

Essay topics:

Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

A significant amount of people reckon that bicycle is not only the most healthier and environment-friendly transport, even though it is not used as a primary form of transport because people consider it is not the safest and not beneficial transport. While the government can prepare either a separate cycle track or make atleast one day manadatary for cycling for every age individual.
To iniciate with, the prominent reason for not using bicycle as a main transport is that people want secure transport whereas bicycle is not the same. To be more clearer, there are not separete lane or track which is only reserved for cycling. Owing to these people met with accident very often. For instance, last Times of India survey stated that 15% accident occurred only with cyclists. Lack of knowledge is another reason because people not completely well aware with the cons of cycling such as it saves our ecosystem, best for exercise, cost-effective and many more. Eventually, people avoid to utilize cycle in its real form.
Nevertheless, making separate lanes or tracks by the legislation can mushroom insterest in people. Unless individual cannot use cycle as a main source, till they feel it safe. Secondary solution is that government should declare any of the day in a month as a cycle day and make it compulsion for each and every person. This can make people more aware about its benefits. For example, in Japan there is a day when everyone oblised to do cycling due to this, Japan has the highest ratio for cycle owner in the world. Ultimately, individuals can start to employ bicycles as a routine.
In conclusion, although most of people are well knowledgeable about cycling benefits, still they prefer other vehicles because they opine that bicycle is not a safe mode for transportation as well as people might not acquire enough knowledge. If government make separate lane or track or strict rule, people will definitely use cycle as a elementary mode of transport.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...ple reckon that bicycle is not only the most healthier and environment-friendly transport, eve...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'main transport'.
Suggestion: main transport
...ominent reason for not using bicycle as a main transport is that people want secure transport wh...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'clearer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: clearer
... whereas bicycle is not the same. To be more clearer, there are not separete lane or track w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid utilizing'.
Suggestion: avoid utilizing
...ctive and many more. Eventually, people avoid to utilize cycle in its real form. Nevertheless, ...
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Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... as a routine. In conclusion, although most of people are well knowledgeable about cycling be...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le, people will definitely use cycle as a elementary mode of transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98489425982 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80078184271 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543806646526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0985843739 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20022103856 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732028166432 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908782334545 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14370661948 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580424495998 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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