You are renting a house in an English speaking country and the landlord has been helpful during your stay Now your friend is interested in renting your place Please write a letter to your landlord to inform your friend that you will be moving out In your

Essay topics:

You are renting a house in an English-speaking country, and the landlord has been helpful during your stay. Now your friend is interested in renting your place. Please write a letter to your landlord to inform your friend that you will be moving out.

In your letter
• tell your landlord that you are leaving and explain why
• thank your landlord for being helpful
• recommend your friend as a prospective tenant.

Dear Mr John,
I am writing this letter to say thank you for all your support during my stay at your house and I also would like to inform you about my friend who has become instrested to rent this house same as me.
Sadly, I would like to inform you that now I have finished my study and I have decided that I will return to my home country because I want to stay with my kith and kin. Already I have missed myriad functions and events due to study. Moreover, now I can work from home owing to such advanced technologies. That is why no meaning to stay in this country while I can manage both from my home.
Indeed, I feel myself the luckiest person who had such a co-operative house owner. I cannot forget all your support which you had provided me such as looking for part-time job, translating few English worlds in my language and motivating me each and every time for better results in my exam.
Well, one of my close friends who has visited this place earlier has become instrested to hire this because he has decided to continue his study for PHD. if I talk about personalilty then he is an honest and tidy person. I am sure he will keep your house spic and span and will never bother you for anything. I can take his responsibility.
Hope we will be touch in future.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... decided to continue his study for PHD. if I talk about personalilty then he is an...
^^
Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... responsibility. Hope we will be touch in future. Yours sincerely, Rehana Diwan.
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, i feel, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33603238866 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35066181647 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5439963489 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273035558867 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871568508288 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100162739676 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142067228574 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108314040191 0.0580467560999 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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