Most of pollution created by cars. Do you agree or disagree?
Mushrooming car’s quantity is a major issue for a bad weather of the World. While one drive car it spreads not only noise but also air pollution, I agree with this phenomenon which I will elaborate with a suitable illustatrations in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, if person drives a car, it spews obnoxious gases in the air which is detrimental either for a human’s breath or for the environment. For example, in Delhi during winter, most of the congested areas face enormose fog just because of over cars. Apart from this, contaminated air may cause some chronic dicease to upcoming generation. If air pollution will become worst in recent time then it would be arduous to limit its harmful impacts. Eventually, air pollution makes one’s life unbreable and unhygien.
Furthermore, noise pollution is also increasing day by day due to cars because roads are being congested, so person tends to horn again and again to drive car fastly. For example, Times of Inda survey stated that seventy percent adults face depression and hearing lose every year due to car’s different irritating noise. Even sometimes one can get direct impact on health isssue which could be hard to recover. Not only any one country faces noise problem but also almost all other contries faces the same hazardous. Ultimately, noise pollution is another major risk for humans.
In conclusion, although car’s are most cost effective and easy to use trasport system for all human beings, it plays pivotal role to add different types of contaminations like noise and air.
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Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Suggestion: one's
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, while, apart from, even so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94594594595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56652517523 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 259.0 20.2975951904 1276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1281.0 106.682146367 1201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 259.0 20.7667163134 1247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 104.0 7.06120827912 1473% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15939794814 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15939794814 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104431576427 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229271419987 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 131.4 13.0946893788 1003% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -191.41 50.2224549098 -381% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 104.3 11.3001002004 923% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.91 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.51 8.58950901804 239% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.6 10.1190380762 1044% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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