Some people say that staying in a hotel when you are in a foreign country is not the best way to know the country and its people What is your opinion

Essay topics:

Some people say that staying in a hotel when you are in a foreign country, is not the best way to know the country and its people.
What is your opinion?

In this contemporary world, travelling to other nation has becoming most fascinating phenomenon. Few folks indicate that accommodating in a hotel when you are in a new country, perhaps it is not the best method to gain knowledge about that nation and indigenous whilst I agree with is notion which I will elaborate with suitable illustration in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, whenever you stay in a hotel. Firstly, you have all predefined services and most of the time not only hotel try to satisfy you with best services but also try to give you homely environment. Owing to this you get in touch lesser with local people which limit your horizons and not able to meet with strangers. Mostly hotel staff speak English international language and also have common meals. For instance, when my neighbor travelled in Dubai and returned, he was not fully aware about their culture, because Hotel has taken care for everything. Secondly, you just listen a narration from hotel staff or guide about their custom and rituals. Like this you have less direct contact.
On the other hand and my own belief that if you live in any home stay or hire a room with local people then that movement you have to go outside for buying some basic grocery from market as well as during your rest time you can gossip with your host, like this you can broaden your horizons. For example, one survey declared that Airbnb has been growing drastically because most individuals would like to stay with local people whenever they travel to abroad. If they hire such room stay then they can save their hard earn money as well as getting more knowledge about their tradition. Moreover, they also feel like adventurous to visit all sight seen by themselves which work as a stress buster. Finally, they can taste those foods which they want to. Whether you can cook or visit street market.
In conclusion, although hotel stay is the most convenient, you cannot know that country wherever you are travel. Unless you stay in local home, you cannot get real feeling about their routines.

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Average: 4.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 937.175257732 183% => OK
No of words: 357.0 206.0 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80112044818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40303158629 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 290.88556701 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2440629071 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.823529412 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235117256011 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771276398644 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666372142813 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149219429517 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543749422424 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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