Some people say that the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Having a lot of money is one of the best achievements of person’s life. A few folk reckon that the optimum way to be contentment in life is to have huge amount of money. While a section of thought opine that lots of money give us happiness, but there are abundant things which can make us merry.
To initiate with, in this contemporary era, everything has become the most expensive, owing to this human required a lot of money to fulfill all desire which occur very often. For Instance, if one’s friend has sophisticated car, then one long for the same. Secondly, if person is rich, one can travel not only with all ease but also can stay in a star rated hotel. When you travel foreign country, it required huge money. In addition to this, when someone has have bank account full, that person can have more confidence and can live life with less worries. Thus, money plays pivotal role to keep a person ecstatic.
On the contrary, there are other myriad things that can give you a sense of cheerfulness. Firstly, a person’s work or creativity, to be more precise, if a person has been working in his own area of interest, then he can be palatable. For instance, Elon Must is amongst the top five richest person of the world, still his real happiness not with his money but for his works. Moreover, you can feel true happiness with your family member either they are adopted or having blood relation. Ultimately, you feel gratification towards your loved ones or work.
In conclusion, Even though money can bring highly expensive material, one can have other sources where someone can feel delightful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53003533569 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33028086131 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 283.0 20.2975951904 1394% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1282.0 106.682146367 1202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 283.0 20.7667163134 1363% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 146.0 7.06120827912 2068% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283758849185 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.283758849185 0.084324248473 337% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197926220078 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11369475268 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 141.4 13.0946893788 1080% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -207.31 50.2224549098 -413% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 112.5 11.3001002004 996% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.47 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.85 8.58950901804 243% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.2 10.1190380762 1138% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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