Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately In your letter you should tell why it is happening what problems it will cause what your suggestions are

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:
• why it is happening
• what problems it will cause
• what your suggestions are.

Respected Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to aware you about dirtiness which we have nearby my area and owing to that we have been facing severe hindrance in our day to day life.
Actaully, we do not have any service for garbage collection on everyday basis, it only comes once a week or sometime biweekly, due to this, my area has become a dumping site. This is the main point where other house oner also throwing their rubbish too.
That is why my neighbourhood and my area having obnoxious smell which sometimes leads to fever and many more diseases. Not only this issue we are facing, but also we cannot go for walking, cycling and cannot play outside. Which is more annoying and irritating.
Well, I would like to suggest you that please arrange a garbage collection on everyday basis or arrage ones in two days. This will eradicate our problem and we can breath in a clean air.
Hope you will do needful.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... collection on everyday basis or arrage ones in two days. This will eradicate our pr...
^^^^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...s will eradicate our problem and we can breath in a clean air. Hope you will do needf...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61988304094 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34037980992 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9834233816 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123900799063 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529111345608 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514705485399 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576762289776 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504083647634 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... collection on everyday basis or arrage ones in two days. This will eradicate our pr...
^^^^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...s will eradicate our problem and we can breath in a clean air. Hope you will do needf...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61988304094 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34037980992 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9834233816 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123900799063 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529111345608 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514705485399 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576762289776 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504083647634 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.