Many people today spend most of their free time at home watching TV series or movies instead of going out. Do you think this is right or wrong?
In this modern era, the majority of individuals would like to spare their extra time at home by watching TV series or films rather than scrolling outside. In my opinion, this has detrimental impact for human beings in terms of health or could be reason for a feeling isolated in spite of having everything around them. This essay will elaborate more with upcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with, the prominent negative effect is a lack of exercise. Owing to this people start to live sedentary lifestyle and at long run this lifestyle becomes the reason for a chronic deseases such as diebetes, cancer, blood pressure and many more. If they get catch by these deseases once, they cannot get rid from these all for a long time. This kind of deseases could be the reason for the financial loss or life loss. For example, seating at home for whole weekend is not only deteriotaring health but also limiting time for physical activities. Physical activity should be done by an individual. Ultimately, the more exercise people do, the more they could become physically fit.
Furthermore, TV series and movies could not be interactive from both the sides and owing to this, after some time people feel isolated and shattred. If people had not been going outside, they would not have made any friendship from surrounding areas. Unless a person does not have much friends, a person cannot get real friends with whom he can discuss day to day hindarances. For instance, a person only make friends when he spends most of his time either at the gym or park. Eventually, Watching TV and movies cannot give social feelings which is basic need for every mankind.
In conclusion, although watchiung TV and films can be a perfect time killer without making much efforts, it is harmful for mental and physical health overall. That is why I opine that going out is one of the best activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8173374613 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51257035832 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6951183667 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5294117647 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222657172579 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682295629644 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599057962964 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134122554716 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377686785223 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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