In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
In Britain, old generation are sent at another place where same age people are living with nurses who take care of these old age people. Well, for this care occationally, legislation pays for the same. In my opinion, the government should pay for medical expenses for these people. I will elaborate my reasons for this view in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the prominent reason for paying all expenses by the government is that Britain is already costlier city than others, where inflation is the rudimentary issue for most of families. They are not only struggling to meet ends but also hardly save anything for future. If they are not saving anything for future, how will they pay for medical bills? Sending old people at nursing care does not mean that they do not love or respect their fosters, however, they want best care and timely drugs which becomes elementary needs for old human beings.
In addition to this, if the government takes care for such uncertain medical expenses, the family can feel stress-free and may plan something better for their own future. For instance, In Canada, all health care services are covered by the government, because of this, the people of this country are happier than other countries. The more enjoyment people have in their lives, the more they will be healthy and strong. Ultimately, the legislation should take responsibility for this.
In conclusion, although families are respecting their loved once in Britain, it would be far better to send old people at the place where similar age people live because there old age people do not feel isolated and taken care immidetely whenever required. I also opine that these all expenses should be bare by the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
... inflation is the rudimentary issue for most of families. They are not only struggling to meet e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95862068966 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51109310561 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2350836815 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467676251834 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167930234307 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755392229868 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294409299918 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820857884816 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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