In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, In Britain, elderly people often go to stay in an old-age home, wherein there is taken by nurses. Sometimes the government takes care of the expenses. In this essay, I will discuss if the government or family should pay for this care. Firstly, I will explore reasons for why family should be taking up the responsibility of senior citizens and secondly, I will discuss pointers on why government should not be responsible for the same.
To begin with, people in today’s world come with a mentality that parents after retirement are nothing but a liability. But the reality is once our parents start to age and cannot work for their living, it is children’s duty to take up all the financial burden, as it is time for paying back. For instance, a baby in its younger age or in adulthood when demands for anything, these parents go an extra mile to make sure all the requirements of the child are fulfilled. Similarly, when our elder family is need of support, we should help them.
Additionally, quality of care is one of the important aspects that needs to be considered. If the government starts taking care of old-age homes, the quality of treatment, of life will be compromised as they have a lot of old people to look after. However, if the family manages to pay for monthly charges of such old age homes, the government will have less burden and hence, the people will also get quality life in their final years.
To summarize, in my opinion, once parents are old and not able to take care of themselves, it is their family’s responsibility to do so as they deserve this.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68794326241 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69692915925 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8426239526 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416796758244 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158666289882 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903999944162 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240643972212 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075364794474 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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