Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some people that people after 65 age should not be permitted to work further, while others opine that they should have choices to work until they want. I, however, concur with the second notion because they have gained experience and after sixty most seniors face financial issues.
On the one hand, If seniors are allowed to work, they might have health problems on regular intervals which may become the biggest hindrance for the organization. Another reason is that the more old age person will work, the lessor opportunities would be there for young generations. And ultimately it would not only become arduous to find job for the upcoming generation but also can become harder to survive. For instance, Government only hires young candidates when their employee gets retirement at the age of 60. Thus, there should be an age limit in each and every sector.
On the other hand, others say that old personnel have seen ups and down in markets, that is why they are well aware of foreseeable inflation and deflation and they also know how to come out from such worse situation. For example, in any family only most old person can motivate to others and able to give an exact solutions for problems. Eventually, old people can become asset for any company.
According to my viewpoint, despite they might have physical problems, they should be allowed to work because this is the only age when humans need strong financial support owing to health issues. And I strongly believe that only job can support them.
In conclusion, although people should not be allowed to work after 65, it is claimed by some that they must be permitted, even I agree with the second viewpoint because this is the age who has gained knowledge and can be a strong pioneer for any company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7928802589 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39624727989 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.466862136 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341643039813 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123389018595 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11557048437 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212191162657 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813815632259 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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