You have recently attended a two day course and now the course organiser is asking for your review and comments Write a letter to the course organiser in your letter Describe the course Explain whether or not you liked the course and why Provide some sugg

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You have recently attended a two-day course, and now the course organiser is asking for your review and comments. Write a letter to the course organiser, in your letter
• Describe the course
• Explain whether or not you liked the course, and why
• Provide some suggestions for improvement.

Dear Mr.John,
I am writing this letter to give my review and suggestions for a two-day course, as per your last email which I had received.
Well, last month I had attended a 2-day course on “Better Communication Skill”. It was conducted by Mr. Willium who has been a Vice President for Desire Education which is famous for its creativity. This course also had some practicals and questionnaires which was quite helpful.
To be honest, I liked this course a lot because for a very long I have been longing to pursue this kind of course. Being a business person, I always work on my soft skill which is pivotal for not only business growth but also in personal life too. Either this kind of training can give the courage to communicate easily without hesitation or improve interpretation skill.
Though It was an amazing course, I would like to suggest some alterations which may helpful either for your organization or for participants. Firstly, you should have to show off some live videos of imminent personalities because they often speak friendly and professionally too. Another thing I would suggest is that you can held group discussions on harsh and common topics which could leave a long-lasting impact on participants and the organization can get awesome reviews.
Hope you will like my review and suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan.

Votes
Average: 9.5 (3 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, I am writing this letter to give my r...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your last email which I had received. Well, last month I had attended a 2-day ...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...r thing I would suggest is that you can held group discussions on harsh and common t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, another thing, kind of, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02202643172 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91620639483 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651982378855 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7323774032 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229409111399 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849567855844 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560982955138 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125624217531 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348635441093 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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