Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Media such as News Channels and Newspapers have started targeting celebrities, especially from the movie industry and sports, for the content. Even frivolous details of their day-to-day life are captured and published to the entire world without their consent. I completely agree that this has actually taken away the privacy of these people and their families. Even though they earn more, It does not mean that they have to compromise on their privacy.
It is understood that people get excited when they see or get to know something about their favorite movie or sports personalities. Being in the Entertainment Industry, these are unavoidable to a certain extent. For instance, they might have to promote their movies or some product, which can be broadcasted. However, at the same moment, media should not go beyond that and track their daily activities violating the privacy of them. It should be kept in mind that celebrities are also humans and they too have a family.
Although celebrities are highly paid, It can never be linked with privacy violations. Media should actually show the hard work and perseverance that these personalities have undergone to achieve their current status. They get paid more because of their hardship and success and not just for being famous. For example, an Olympic champion might have undergone a decade of rigorous training to win a gold medal. The common people should focus on these part of the life of their heroes instead of focusing on the private life of them.
To conclude, It can be reiterated that celebrities are also humans just like everyone whose privacy has to be respected irrespective of their income or level of fame by both Media and the common man.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03157894737 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63643061537 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9091959103 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311790777746 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104188581343 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409520220287 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191113843758 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402580059891 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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