You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring it to your notice of my recent awful experience in your restaurant. Please allow me to elaborate further.
As it was my wedding anniversary, I decided to have an exquisite dinner with my family at your restaurant last Thursday. I have known this place for years, especially for the hospitality and delicious foods. However, It was not all the same during our last visit.
We ordered two Hamburgers, a Cheese pizza and a Coke but it was served nearly half an hour late than expected. As we do not want to spoil our mood, we just let it go. But the next thing that happened was totally unpardonable. There were two strands of hair in the Cheese pizza which was completely disgusting and the pizza base crust appeared to be half-cooked and not well seasoned with the toppings.
We just went out canceling our order.
I was actually wondering how this could happen in such a popular restaurant. I urge you to look into this with the highest priority in order to avoid such cases in the future. It would be better if a stern warning is issued to the chef and bearers on that day for this incident.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully.
Anand.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, so, well, as to, all the same
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64055299539 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55981798681 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6475155988 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9285714286 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117113560628 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322952696545 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454451660738 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506622311226 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362920376544 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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