You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to request your approval for conducting a presentation to share my learnings, gained in the latest Mobile Developers Conference held in the Indian Institute of Science, Bangalore. Please allow me to elaborate.
In order to have the presentation engaging and interactive, I have planned for a shorter powerpoint presentation with a few slides, combined with a practical workshop session. This can aid the participants to easily grasp and understand the topics that I would cover.
Since secure development and security of mobile applications is on top of everyone's mind, I have planned to interact and share more on those topics. Although a lot of online materials are available online on mobile security, the ideas that I have learnt are quite simple and unique. It will not take more than an hour as a longer duration can hinder the participants' engagement.
If all the mobile developers, in addition to security testing engineers, of our site can attend this session, It will prove beneficial for our concern in the long run. As we have state-of-the-art projectors and equipment inside our office conference room, the session can be organized there itself.
Hoping for a favourable response from your side regarding this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Anand
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'participants'' or 'participant's'?
Suggestion: participants'; participant's
...our as a longer duration can hinder the participants engagement. If all the mobile develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28708133971 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0275400818 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9897397593 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145309025759 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500934742891 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561882724239 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792925813743 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598605638193 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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