You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear sir,
I am Nancy, from Human resource department, writing this letter to take permission from you about the presentation that i would like to deliver which i attended last week in the conference. However, I am very impressed with the topic , so I am thinking of sharing this with others.
The main theme of the presentation is Obesity, a very common issue which is more prevalent these days due to less body activity. Since , most of our office workers are living sedantery lifestyles and becoming obese,so, my major concern of this presentation is realted to their good health.
Obesiy , high accomulation of fat in body ,is the main topic and I would like to present its causative factors and also its prevention.It would take only 15 minutes to deliver, 10 minutes for presentation and 5 minutes for feedback.
Moreover, I would like to deliver this presentaion in the office campus, which involves office boys staff from finance department. I will conduct this before Lunch, so please allow me some time before lunch in which I can make people aware regarding this health issue.
Thank You.
I am waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Nancy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73961386591 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7172224783 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198831818503 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857907298054 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782350573296 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936972401923 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554483477184 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.