n today’s advanced science and technology people still values artists like painter, musician and writer. How can arts make a difference in our society that science and technology cannot?
Though we are living in technological era, still people give importance to the artists such as painter, musician and writer. Because of this reason, today arts have made a specific place among the hearts of persons that technology cannot do. In the following paragraphs , I will explain the pivotal role of arts in individual’s life.
Firstly, arts brings many positive changes in the person. It is the only mean that artists can show their talents in front of the people . For example- musicians with their different music genera can alter the mood of individuals especially soft music help to relieve stress and to rejuvenate the person. Similarly, awriter through his writing skills can express their feeling and positively change the perception of person.
Despite this , artists can earn good amount of money for running their livelihood which further motivates the artist to do more contribution in his skills. For instance- several music albums are being purchased by people everyday which ultimately benefits the musicians in his finances and make him popular in the world for his commendable skills.
To conclude, nevertheless the world is engaged with science and technology but art not only give the chance to express the talent but also is a good source of entertainment and relaxation. Therfore , it would be not good to compare arts with any other technology, as it is inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17621145374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76631167367 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625550660793 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7152787808 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.818181818 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261066521557 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902538898476 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699144750697 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143766010442 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762898228124 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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