You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is believed by few, that advertisements push them to purchase the products that are not really needed, and on the other hand, it is viewed as the entry point of knowledge about the products that can enhance our daily routine. In my opinion, I agree that advertisements are required to get first-hand information about any goods that we purchase, and necessity and research drive the purchasing decision rather than mere visuals.
In order to reach millions of customers, all the companies market their products through print media such as newspapers, daily magazines and posters, and visual media such as television and movies. Without this kind of communication, it will be extremely difficult for the general public to know about the newly launched product. Once they come to know about it, they get a chance to research further on it and understand whether it suits their needs and budget. Let it be a simple cooking item that we daily consume, such as salt and sugar, or be a more complex item such as a home security system, It can be purchased only when it is known to the public that it is available in the market.
The purchasing decision is not simply driven by visuals where celebrities from Film and Sports industries vouch for some product. It is completely decided by various factors such as the necessity of the product, the brand value of the company, competitive price, and last but not least, the durability of the product. When all these factors create a positive vision, it influences the person to buy the product.
In conclusion, advertisement is an important and foremost factor in influencing the purchasing decision of the people. However, it is not the only factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... it will be extremely difficult for the general public to know about the newly launched produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91319444444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77278848801 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9907373624 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159984555936 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589797800756 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496416648738 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916778164374 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563953154102 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.